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| From the tip of my pen 2007-03-07 ch 5,  | abusewrite more write more! i love it, its really good! hihi Faolon is the **! love, Emma |
| Death'sBestFriend 2007-01-28 ch 5, | abusei cant wait for the next chapter!! |
| Mistress of the Tormented 2007-01-21 ch 5, | abuseoh my god... Damn you! how am i supposed to wait for the chapter when you left me hanging like that? please please please right more and more and more... |
| Mistress of the Tormented 2007-01-21 ch 4, | abuseOH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD... I THINK IM IN LOVE WITH FAOLAN!e |
| xtotallyatpeacex 2007-01-20 ch 5, | abuseWow. I'm confuzzled. But yeah... Good job, update again soon. :D |
| xtotallyatpeacex 2006-12-04 ch 4, | abuseEr... bit confused with the last coupla chapters, to be honest. They kind of jump around a bit too much, but other than that it seems interesting so far. I thought the brother was going to be the good guy and Faolan was gonna be the abusive hated vamp, etc. But yeah, hope you update soon! :D |
| BDhei 2006-11-29 ch 2, | abuseOkay, I thought I should just point out that this isn't exactly realistic, in terms of happenings, and emotions. Also, you really need to work on making some new character persona's. All of your characters are "rebels" or "hardcore" or whatever you want to call it, and it grows more and more bland with every passing story, as it does with everyone's. +Blaike Dhei* |
| Mistress of the Tormented 2006-11-23 ch 2, | abuseMy gosh... I think this one is going to be my favorite.. i can just feel it. Well what is there to say about it except that the fact it`s awesome... Congrats. I really want to read more, so get to it and write. xoxoxoxoxoxo |
| Mistress of the Tormented 2006-11-20 ch 1, | abuseSorry, Suze but i disagree... i think the swearing makes it seem more real. Like a girl like that is going to swear... i like it, it is very different than what what you normally write but your doing well and i cant wait till i read more :D |
| Suze-Booze 2006-11-18 ch 1, | abuseI love it! But like i told you before... never use swearwords in ur stories. they make it seem less professional, u know? other than that... well the girl is still a bit of a rebel like with most of your stories, so still; try to fix yourself on ur ppls' characters. This is only heplful constructive advice, love. So keep the writing going! |