Almost chilling, but in an awesome way. You could add more, but it's really cool.

OH now this one is interesting!

I like the rhyme that's cool. And the repetitiveness worked!

noice!

~Tesa

I really, really like the way you did that! This was really well done, there was no forced rhyme and you used fantastic word choice! Bravo!
-Keep Writting,
Kathryn