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| Cori 2006-11-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love the wistful feeling here, and the way you make it feel so spontaneous, so whimsical, yet so true. And the connection between the speaker and the crane, two hearts and one wish, is very cool. Keep writing, please! ~The Empress |
| Crossing the Rubicon 2006-11-17 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely love the last three lines. They took my breath away. Keep it up. |