encouraging at the end, and self-reflective. I can relate.

This is wonderful. :) I heart it! Hehe. Thanks for sharing, and keep writing!

~Anna~ ^_^

took words out of my mouth. splendid work!

I like hte hopeful ending and the imagery in the beginning is beautiful

interesting - sounds like the transitional poem from high school to uni for some reason. nice work.

once again, as descriptive as ever.
great poem. it makes me shiver ;D

I'm not brilliant at constructive reviews so sorry, but I thought this was fantastic.

WOW that was really beautiful!
Is I mean because it was but it still is,
do you see what I'm tring to say?
(I thought it sounded strange myself)

Indeed, dreams don't shatter...
but after a while you forget about them.
It is less painful but when one's realizes he lost them it is still hard.

I think this a somber poem (do I feel this rightly?)
but it still is positive...
The somberness is writen so well that it actually feels nice,
one would almost want to feel somber,
at least I do (smile)

Enjoyed reading this very much!
Lhune

you tie nature and life
into one package
so often

Wonderful imagery and subtle but powerful message. I especially enjoyed the forth stanza, "And while waiting, but ...". The whole message reminds me of the saying that old soliders don't die, they just fade away. Good work. Keep writing, k.

This poem has a great atmosphere to it! I liked how it seemd to pull you into it's world.

Beautifully written, I love this piece. The fourth stanza is especially wonderfull. Very well done, great work and keep writing. Thanks for your review.

You always write such beautiful work. I have to clap for you...

Cheers!