Wow! This is magical! Everyone should have the pleasure of reading this!

There are lines here that just keep coming back to me over and over. "And to be seen in the remembrance of a duly played ocean", "And in one moment of liveliness, I was sent forward / To guide you to your ultimate fly / To see you through the hours till dawn / And I could still taste the heroic blur of a half – lid bare", "And the bottomless box grunted in desire", - beautiful! - to quote every equally beautiful line would be to recite the entire poem! And number 'i' totally knocked me over all by itself, not to mention the rest!

You are so incredibly talented, and I hope you never stop writing. I don't mean to seem hyperactive or to flood you with reviews, but this is truly remarkable. It has such an otherworldly, ancient aura about it and the imagery is so strong. Completely enchanting!