Wow. I really enjoyed this, it was interesting, original and it really makes you think and explore your own beliefs and theories. thanks for a great piece of work!

"If they are created in his image, can he himself be all that pure?"

definitely my favorite line! god is portrayed so perfectly as a compassionate yet cold being, and i totally love how lucifer is the good guy - i actually feel sorry for him :) i wonder how you'd retell other well-known bible stories? never pictured the fall of lucifer like this...

anyway, i just figured out that i sent my reply to your...reply...under a different username 'cause i changed it for awhile and then changed it back...so maybe it got deleted or something -shrug- it was under 'axidentilly on perpuss'. i've been gone (finally summer!!) so i didn't notice. but if you just didn't get it, i can resend it or whatever.

later,
~arydesia

Wonderfully written and truly inspiring!

wow, this is actually good, even to an atheist! ^.^ try to write more soon?

This one makes you think, definitely. An amazing piece in and of itself, and probably the best on the site. Better than anything I've posted on here.

That was absolutly amazing. I have no words to describe just how amazing this piece of work is.