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| Jonathan 2008-07-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really like this one. It short and to the point. One of the favorites so far going down this list of your poems. |
| His Mercy's Waiting 2006-12-09 ch 1,  | abuseClever way of leading into the next line. The title gives the poem an overall warmth. Good job and keep writing! =) |
| The Postscript 2006-11-26 ch 1, | abuseReminds me of the song Chasing Cars by Snow Patrol or something of the like. Great imagery. Keep writing, k. |