hi wow. yep that has allways been your special element connie is testing the elements of peoples friendships to the max when something terrable happenes! i also love the ending in this chapter. it was so sweet and so awsome! i cannot beleive that some people (ahem) i wonder who... flamed you! the people who did that (ahem) are idiots and they could not even try and muster up such a heartwarming ending that shined light in all of our hearts like u did! i would just love to see him try and make a story! it will not be as good as yours is i am damn well sure of that! also i know that this review just might seam like the longest damn review that i have ever done, but i just love the chapter! it comes together nicely in a neat little package and do not let some people (ahem) tell u otherwise because they have no idea what we writers have to go through to actually try and write a damn story. especially when we have so many things to do that it is even imposible to write even a sentance and also when u have people (ahem) who will not give u the time of day to write anything in the whole wide world! so he has np clue what he is talking about and just keep that in mind. I WOULD LOVE TO SEE HIM TRY AND WRITE HA!

KEEP WRITING AND I WILL KEEP READING!

(note, my screen name may change because thats gennys screen name and i do not wonna b connected with her in anyway. ok?

sortry about that. lol. me loved the story though! plz forgive me. i had a major comp crash.

wow. i wonna know what she is going to do with that neckalas. and understand is 1 word by the way. keep it up. may i make a sugestion. have the neckalas be a bad thing at first than make K use that thing to her atvantage. idk what i am sayinmg here. thats just my sugezstion

OMFG i am in here! do i make another appearance? or does she leave 4 good?

really good! this is robert kingett! this is a really nice story. but it sounds like evreyday life. that means nothing exiting has happend yet. i guess that uis how U wanted it. and i think U based 1 of the charicters from a kid from our school... who is it? i also added U to my story alert list and author alert list U do the same K? and read ALL OF MY STORYS OK?