I read this really sad story. I liked it. The words flowed. Your writing style is very engaging. I think you did a great job ot this tragic story. I'm thankfull that you reviewed the story my friend and I are writing. It's called Under One Banner.

it's really good!

thats pretty good, momo!!

great story

whoa. very well writen. i could actually see that happening in real life. i wonder though, you say you wrote this for your english class? (er, something like that) if you didn't get an Q on that, i will gladly say that i am glad i don't your teacher. i like how you did the letters.

Very nicely done. Well written, and well thought-out. Satisfying ending. *claps*

So sad! But I like it :) The entire story has a feel of mystery, but at the end it feels so complete. Very well done ^_^