I'm so sorry about your loss

This was a beautiful poem for an extremely sad situation. I'm sorry that you had to go through that, but you managed to put it in words really well. The poem is true...people never die as long as you remember them. Anyway, good job on a tough topic to write about!

I'm so sorry that you had to go through this. But despite the sadness of the event, you've focused on the happy, bright person and it is really beautiful.