This is perfect-everything. The length, the meaning, the last line.

I really liked this one. Your stories have a lot of meaning, even if they are short. and the last few lines hold a lot of impact. i like that.

You should lengthen this a lot more. It's way too short. I like what you have written here, but it's not really a story if you don't develop it more, otherwise you should put it as an essay and not fiction.

Future? shoot I see that right now is that your point?