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| Incubi Nightmare 2007-12-14 ch 1, | abuseA very good idea with a nice twist. |
| Romance-luver222 2007-08-20 ch 1, | abuseOkay...that was just plain creepy! Totally awesome...but creepy. I liked the whole, the story is actually them thing. Very clever. Von was sweeter in this then I have ever seen him before in my life...and Nicki was just plain crazy...which I have seen before...but it's always great fun to see. Well, I seriously liked this story...even though it was pretty creepy by the end...I loved it! Awesome job! |
| Mor 2007-04-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseThe suspense! |
| Bloody Dewfall 2006-11-27 ch 1, | abuseOMG! o.O What a creepy twisted story indeed! And you are the one who said you can't write stories... I found the first sentence rather catchy ( well, for me at least ^_^) and I read the whole of it in one breath. It's very dark, there is that feeling even from the beginnig, some kind of estrangement; and then this: "Maybe he would be able to eradicate the awful chill in the room and free his lover from the ice." The intensity of these few words is absolutely amazing, I seemed to feel that chill around me. And what is more, the murder is not only unexpected but unexplained. Madness? I'll be thinking of it today. |