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Reviews For: How To Rescue A Princess

Incubi Nightmare
2007-12-14
ch 1,
abuseA very good idea with a nice twist.
Romance-luver222
2007-08-20
ch 1,
abuseOkay...that was just plain creepy! Totally awesome...but creepy. I liked the whole, the story is actually them thing. Very clever. Von was sweeter in this then I have ever seen him before in my life...and Nicki was just plain crazy...which I have seen before...but it's always great fun to see. Well, I seriously liked this story...even though it was pretty creepy by the end...I loved it! Awesome job!
Mor
2007-04-29
ch 1, anon.
abuseThe suspense!
Bloody Dewfall
2006-11-27
ch 1,
abuseOMG! o.O What a creepy twisted story indeed! And you are the one who said you can't write stories...
I found the first sentence rather catchy ( well, for me at least ^_^) and I read the whole of it in one breath.
It's very dark, there is that feeling even from the beginnig, some kind of estrangement; and then this:

"Maybe he would be able to eradicate the awful chill in the room and free his lover from the ice."

The intensity of these few words is absolutely amazing, I seemed to feel that chill around me.
And what is more, the murder is not only unexpected but unexplained. Madness?
I'll be thinking of it today.
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