nice. i loved the ending. some guys are just so slow. ;]

Cute story. I like the little poem thing. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

aww for the first story i've read on this site, that's really cute ^_^ kudos to you!
-Ortensia

hey gurl..aw that is so freaking sweet..that was great one-shot...well just heading out then...peace out gurl...bye-bye then...:D...

It's like High School Musical. Only shorter and without the musical. So really, not at all.