nice one indeed. i liked that it was limited to pure dialogue, leaving it open for interpretation. very fluid also.

so lois went bald, huh? ever wonder why almost everyone has a first and last name that begins with the same letter? 'lois lane' 'lex luthor' 'lana lang' 'clark kent' (hey, close enough!) what's with all the l's? ok, i'm just babbling now.

anyway, me liked.

I love how you effortlessly paint scenes, Michael; they're so off the cuff! This one was cool and unique in how you kept it all a dialoge, allowing the reader to use his/her own imagination for the rest without all the 'he said/she said' getting in the way...not to mention the 'Superman' scenairo running throughout it was a nice touch too. (seems to be another one of your favorite 'themes'). Another great short Michael. Keep pulling them out of your hat!

"...To live and love another day, Kal." ~Scottie

Interesting. It's all in dialogue.