I really like the line "if you are not a poet, you will surely fail at what you are striving to do." Very True.

the last three lines have a captivating reality that encapsules the reader
braveh

Thank you for the review.

I like this poem. The voice is unusual; I don't quite hear this tone very often in poems dealing with subjects like this. Personally, I find "allyoucanbe" very intruiging. It was creative to combine it into one word, I applaud you. Overall, this was very nicely done.