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Fleur de l'Esprit 2009-06-09 . chapter 1
This is really interesting -- it has a very solid beat to it underlying each line. I like that you made the point very clear that this person sees the world in a different way, but underneath that, they're still a person. Some of the ways you phrased things -- characterization of numbers, for example -- made me think of this book I love, Evil Genius by Catherine Jinx. Pick it up. :-) Anyways, nicely done!
Sir Pebbles 2008-11-26 . chapter 1
I don't know where to start. My sister has aspergers, too, and I always want to know how she thinks about things. It's harder for people with that disability. This is really great. I hope to one day understand how she sees the world...
shinco 2007-02-06 . chapter 1
HEY, OLYMPIA! Man, it's been so long! I haven't been able to get on the net much! :( I'm sorry it's been so long! I've mostly only been able to do school stuff! :( But, hey, this was a great expression of what you're like! But man, you're depressed, aren't you? Meow, I can help, though! I'll pray for you lotses! :) Don't worry, I've talked to you so much, I feel I understand you a bunch! :) And even if I don't completely understand you, the more we talk, the more it'll happen! This was nice, Olympia! Good job, and I hope I can have a conversation with you soon! ;)
Depression Sucks 2006-12-24 . chapter 1
Wow. Very insightful.

Haven't been on here in forever...

You've changed so much, Olympia!

I love reading anything you write. Even if it takes me awhile to get to it, I do eventually read it.

Even if we never speak to each other again, you're still awesome.
eraced 2006-11-28 . chapter 1
hay, nice work. i love it. keep writing.



still insane, but not bleeding as much. ~erAced~
Nina Windia 2006-11-27 . chapter 1
It's nice to see something from you again Olympia, It's been a while since you posted anything.

This is very interesting. You seem to have changed quite a bit in the last year or so. You say here you don't like fiction, but you used to write lots of it. (And really brilliant fiction too!) Too bad those stories are gone, I really liked them.
On Eagle's Wings 2006-11-18 . chapter 1
Fascinating.
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