 shadowcat86 2007-02-24 . chapter 1Awesome randomness! |
 Greyfox Cowgirl 2006-12-01 . chapter 1SPLEEN! Haha You said spleen! Different... Two people huh? Well... I think this was rather odd. |
 DarthKader 2006-11-21 . chapter 1This is...interesting. And rhymes, I like rhymes, keep on trucking. |
 Black Alias 2006-11-18 . chapter 1Wow! That is really funny! And I love how it kinda turned into a story toward the end. Well, the whole thing sounds like a whimsical story that is fun to read. Also, I found the silliness to be refreshing. |
 Mireille Caelarily 2006-11-18 . chapter 1lol! bizarre, but...amusing. actually made me laugh out loud, congratulations. :) |