nice kitty. this is just a little cc so don't kill me cause i love you. try to go for more dept and color. don't say word for word what you mean. just allude to it. example :this is from one of my poems: "Cursed by Grace and bound by Fire."
You see how i alluded to Saten but never said the name. try that it will capture you readers with better efficiency.

keep writting
Ame