Great chapter! I love dream scenes!

This is familiar! Heehee. Anyhow, I love this. J is sexy. Anyhow, great chapter. Love the dream!

Great chapter!

Great new fic!! I love J.!!

Great work! I'm really enjoying this. I like James POV too. He's cool :)

Great job with the imagery in this part. I can't wait for more.

(Oh, and you should be ashamed for putting something up while I should be writing my nano, you bad woman!--you know I can't resist reading my chapter updates!!)

Oh, nicely done, Kimmi! I look forward to more of this. The characters are top notch and the dialogue flows really well. I'm off to read the second half.

This is great! You're a very talented author! I can't wait for the next chapter!

It actually sounds pretty good. I'll keep checking it out for updates. I wanna know how it goes along.