 iman1234 2009-07-26 . chapter 14really good update soon |
 confused.soul28 2008-04-06 . chapter 14i am completely in love with this story! it's simply amazing |
 jujube 2008-03-25 . chapter 14 cute story, but the characters are falling in luv way 2 quickly. as for Sophie who does she luv marcus or david?? its a good story but I think u rush things a lil bit 2 much. how can they talk about betrayal when they spoke 2 each others only once, let alone considere themselves in luv... |
 sousie 2008-03-14 . chapter 14update soon it's awsome |
 atreyu love 2008-03-10 . chapter 14NO!
I DONT LIKE THE PRINCESS... even if shes pretending..
but i dont know, its a very convincing act.
i want Sophie to end up with Marcus!!
they are so cute!
and i hope david doesnt die or end up with someone horrid.
PLEASE UPDATE! |
 atreyu love 2008-03-10 . chapter 13is the princess going to end up with Marcus?
NO!
and i hope david doesnt die :( |
 atreyu love 2008-03-10 . chapter 10i hope the princess isnt mad at her :(
and i hope she ends up with Marcus NOT DAVID! |
 atreyu love 2008-03-10 . chapter 8i HATE David!
i hope she ends up with Marcus :) |
 atreyu love 2008-03-10 . chapter 1i like this story :)
wheres the prince? lol |
 LeenElle 2008-03-10 . chapter 14Good chapter :) I just wanted to say, as something to chew on...that this was a really long chapter, with not a huge pay off in the end of it. I agree that it is important to see that the Princess is going to give her a second chance, and that it is probably going to change a lot within the story. But you take a really long time getting there. If you could have added another important element to this chapter, the length of it would have been easier...in my mind. Not that it wasn't good, it was, and I'm so excited that you have another chapter up! It's been way too long. But, I think you could have edited this down...Anyway, I'm so looking forward to the next chapter! |
 blue-eye-frog 2008-03-08 . chapter 13I LOVED IT! it's just SO cute! of course, i'm really hoping that u won't kill the prince off. but it's got a cute thing goin 4 it. |
 taa2s 2008-02-12 . chapter 13 Love this story so far!! when's the update gonna come? |
 snakecharm 2008-01-18 . chapter 13 I love your story. I'm a grammer freak, but when it comes to great stories like this, I could care less personally. Keep writing. I hope you get the nest chapter up soon. |
 miaka1414 2008-01-17 . chapter 13hey. i really like this story. i actually found it not too long ago. i think that it is rather well written and has twists that keep it interesting. good job!! plz post more soon!!
rhi :) |
 Inkhearts and Inkstains 2008-01-17 . chapter 13I can't wait for more. Please update soon. |