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| writergurlLW 2007-01-15 ch 1,  | abuseGreat story and plot idea. I saw a few run-on sentences and misspelled words, but you did use a nice variety of adjectives. Some of the words you chose were excellent and made me wonder why I hadn't used a word like that in my story. |