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| Kjersti 2007-06-25 ch 4, anon. | abuseThis was an incredibly sweet story. I loved it. You write really well, and the characters were great. Wanted to hit Jason myself. Great work! :) |
| Her Wishing Well 2007-04-17 ch 4,  | abuseThis was really good. I liked the ending and the emotional imagery conveyed in this. |
| Heloise 2006-12-27 ch 4, | abuseAw. You should write a story called "I Wuv Everyone." And Ami cuddles a soft and squishy teddy bear...it turns into Eli. Aw. How SWEET. |
| RayRay and beanzie 2006-12-09 ch 4, anon. | abusehey..im luvin the story..keep up the awesome work and update son..ciao |
| Tatiana Moore 2006-12-05 ch 4, | abuseGood! Lots of emotions in this chapter but I felt a definite ending to it. Glad to see that she had a little hope for her future and that maybe she won't hate everyone. It was good that you didn't make her flip automatically--meaning, I liked the way you had her yelling at the person playing prince. Very good... Overall really well done. Good luck with your school deadlines! |
| Bob n Kazzi 2006-12-05 ch 4, anon. | abusePredictable in a sweet way. A cute story that leaves a smile on your face and a warm feeling that somewhere someone is waiting for you. Even if he is disallusioned with ** and gorgeous model-esque girlies. lol Liked it a lot. Well done. |
| Ollie May 2006-12-05 ch 4, | abuseoh! I'm going to say the one thing I always hate when people review my stuff but is so totally true: I wish it had been longer! This was such a great story, from start to finish you did an excellent job. Absolutely loved it! Ollie May |
| SpawnMeister666 2006-12-05 ch 4, | abuseUrrgh... Sickly sweet happy ending! I hate it when that happens! :-) Spawny |
| The FiboNACHI Sequence 2006-12-05 ch 4, | abuse*laughs8 Ok, OK, OK... The matt and barayden bit DID just happen to make me smile and jump around a bit, but nothing more. I love this writing style. you create characters who are atypical but not all the same kind of atypical. You have gotten inside the character shead and made their thoughts seem like the personal thoughts, not the authours thoughts. well done! |
| Oooh.Look.A Cat 2006-12-05 ch 4, | abusethat was excellent, very cute, i love it. |
| RayRay and Beanzie 2006-12-02 ch 3, | abusehiya...great chapter..once again very interesting..and now i know a lot more about Ami...i really do love the characters..so keep up the amazing work and please please please update soon..i really want to know what will happen next..anyways..ciaoo! oh yeah..and if you get the chance..please check out our story..would really appreciate it..anyways..thanks. |
| swimchickslam 2006-11-30 ch 2, | abuseOMG! So shocking! Hope you update soon!! |
| EleanorDear 2006-11-30 ch 3, | abuseThis may be becoming my favorite of your stories! I can't wait for the next chapter. |
| SpawnMeister666 2006-11-30 ch 3, | abuseThe more I read of this the more I like it. Yes, it may be a little cheesy in places, but there's nothing wrong with cheese when it's done as well as this is. Liking it very much... Spawny |
| SpawnMeister666 2006-11-29 ch 1, | abuseThis is an interesting first chapter. Not really sure where it's going yet, and can't decide if I care enough about the main character, but I'm certainly willing to stick with it for now and see where it's headed! Spawny |