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Insomiak 2008-05-12 ch 15,	abuseM, Keith. I like Keith. I'll probably like his dad too. UPDATE SON PLEASE.
Insomiak 2008-05-11 ch 12,	abuseAW. There's like 400 W's there—fpress just takes them out 'cause it hates me. I lovee this. It (the story) wont let me sleep, though, so its a love/hate relationship(sigh).
Insomiak 2008-05-11 ch 11,	abuse"You’re here; we’re , get over it." “We always have so much fun with Tami, I just love her.” YOU MAKE ME GIGGLE. And that last line was total killer. I wanna go to bed. But, you know, Ill be up until I finish this. LOVES.
Insomiak 2008-05-11 ch 10,	abuseThis is weird. It's weird. Very weird. ' weird! YAY RENT! Okay, okay, Eli needs to kick some pedo . RIGHT NOW. Pfftt... I'm gonna be up all night. (heart).
Insomiak 2008-05-11 ch 9,	abuse(cries and beats Mr. Armstrong over the head with a two by four) D: D: STOP TOUCHING MADISON YOU DIRTY **. You're so fly you writer of gay smut you(heart!!)
Insomiak 2008-05-11 ch 8,	abuseLawls, I'ma gonna kill that principle. Right in the face. Like, really, I have never been that disgusted by two guys having sex. (hate). Not that it wasn't written well... pfft. Your writing is like food: always good.
Insomiak 2008-05-11 ch 7,	abuseAW ** YOU(heart). You got me hooked D: And right before exams. They're so wonderful for each other! And the sorta-slow-but-not-annoyingly-slow plot and falling-in-love-ness is PERFECT. (gigglesnort) I love it.
Insomiak 2008-05-11 ch 5,	abuse“They’re my stalkers. Stalkers, this is Eli, my love.” Madison grinned and ruffled my hair. I slapped his hand away. “Stop it.” “But, lover!” “Stop it!” “Fine! Fine…” That entire scene was really really really really really really really really cute. :D
nonaccount 2008-05-02 ch 15,	abuseShould I be shot for taking so long (again) to review this latest installment in your wonderfully sweaty series? Hmm . . . maybe, but not fatally, of course. Maybe the bullet could kind of just graze my shoulder as it passes periously close to my person. Thus achieving two results: revenge for the disgustingly late review and a cool scar for me. I mean, how many people can say, 'Oh, that? (shrugs nonchalantly) That's just a scar from this gunfight I was in. Yeah, you know how it is . . . oh right, maybe you don't.' Back to the review! YAY! You mentioned me in your author's note - oh, I feel so special. :) And yeah, thank god, this horrible thing with Armswrong will be over soon. Poor Madison I think guilt is holding him back from turning Armswrong in. So what if Madison kind of got something out of the twisted deal? Armswrong still forced sex on an underage boy under his care! Frankly, that's all that matters. Well, that and Eli and Madison's blossoming love which will surely be allowed to flourish in the florid fields of fecundity once Armswrong is out of the picture. Er, maybe?
Andrea 2008-04-28 ch 9, anon.	abuse“I have the books; we aren’t aloud to use the computers…. Where should we meet up? My roommate’s with his girlfriend so we can’t go to my room.” I think you mean allowed. I don't like to correct people, but I couldn't help this one :P. Liking the story thus far though, will continue to read on!
Iizolda 2008-04-20 ch 15,	abuseOMG!! I've just read this story and I have to say it's amazing! The plot is incredible and your writing skills are wonderful!
Duuude 2008-04-08 ch 15,	abuseOmgsh. I don't know if I'm commented before but if I haven't it's because this story is so amazingly amazing. Praise to you! XD This is so ** awesome, it's unbelievable. For seriously. I love the plot and we're getting into the juicy part right now so I cannot wait at all for the next chapter. I got to read all of this in like a few hours ... not all at once. xD And yeah... I thought it was complete but it's not so I'll be waiting for the next one. And hearing things of you updating late have done nothing to calm my nerves. So please update soon! I just love Eli! I hope he saves Madison! And I bet Keith's dad is a lawyer... Heheh. Can't wait, see ya! Until next time. =]
Gabrielle 2008-04-07 ch 15, anon.	abuseThank you for the wonderful story. A few points, starting with the strongest: -Armstrong is an ** and he needs to die. QUICKLY. -I absolutely adore how Madison and Eli love each other, each in their quirky ways. I love how Eli is so willing to protect Madison; I love how Madison is so sweet, but still badass at the same time. -Eli's parents are PRICKS. They, also, need to die a quick, painful death. -Holley is a PERVERT, GROSS, and... icky. But I suppose you need just as much conflict as you need fluff.
cescy 2008-04-05 ch 15,	abuseso so good. i read all the chapters in one go. thanks! its good, nice style, nice flow, nice drama, nice boys. i'd addicted. thanks :D
sweetcatastrophes 2008-04-02 ch 15,	abusei love this story!! update soon!

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