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| Darkened Starlight 2007-06-06 ch 12,  | abuseInteresting and well written. A little hard to understand in parts (maybe think about adding some more description or maybe more punctuation in your dialogue??), but an intriguing plot and and excellent ending. "Power corrupts." Too true. Great job! |
| Waffle-chan 2007-02-05 ch 6, | abuseYou've got a really deep and poetic story going here. My compliments to the author! |
| Fleur-de-lis Evans 2007-01-30 ch 11, | abuseWow. Damn... Please make Nika not like Tatina... Anyway, very good. very good - Fleur |
| Fleur-de-lis Evans 2007-01-28 ch 9, | abuseWow! you'd get alot more reviews if you accepted annymous ones. Write more! why do you always leave cliff hangers? |
| coltsrule 2006-11-20 ch 2, | abuseits good so far. its an interesting background and plot. update! |
| Fleur-de-lis Evans 2006-11-20 ch 2, | abusewow. that is a really good story. you should update soon. it's really deep and engaging. where did you come up with this idea? |