Hey, I just had a thought. Maybe you could post this on fanfiction. I think it might be better, seeing how your idea is not totally original. But maybe it will turn out to be...I dunno. o_o

I like your style writing, however this is not an original piece.

This has been written before, and made in to a movie... Including the same name. :/

Catching start, I want to see what happens!

the preview and prologue sound interesting. update soon!