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| Lovely Marshmallow Queen 2008-04-08 ch 1,  | abuseWow you have some kind of talent. The last line really hit me ... "But you ought to realize, she loved you so much better when she didn't know you love her too." Wow ... the fluid flow of this was just perfect. I think I'm becoming a fan of your work now. |
| Alicia Marianne 2007-10-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat last sentence meant alot to me. |
| super happy nuclear girl 2007-05-24 ch 1, | abuse"Four days out of five you write her anonymous postcards in your illegible handwriting." - I'm not the only one who does that. Wow. I think I met a girl like this girl before. She hated me. Aha, but anyway. THIS. And you, perfect, perfect, perfect. I like how short it is. Sweet, perfect. God. Just... Amazing. |
| andrealiz. 2007-02-24 ch 1, | abuseamazing. i don't even know how to describe how much i like this. i especially love the last line. just breathtaking. |
| lessons you learn 2007-01-04 ch 1, | abuse"it was, pretty, like those scars on her arms that she claims are for fashion" I love that line. Gorgeous. |
| sporkofdoom 2006-12-20 ch 1, | abuseOh this is beautiful. Intense. The bit about magnetic poetry was... amazing. And the bit about Wednesdays. |
| ayadora 2006-12-07 ch 1, | abuseI like her. She reminds me of me, except better at life. Does she have a name? |
| DXM Junkie 2006-12-03 ch 1, | abuse"Fashion statement..." So true. This is wonderful. |
| Idiot Pilot 2006-12-03 ch 1, | abuseI like this story a lot, especially the last line. I don't understand the line about "She hates Wednesdays, except for the fifty-cent coffee". Did that event occur on a Wednesday? Interesting character study. |
| Aimee Raven 2006-11-27 ch 1, | abuse"like those scars on her arms that she claims are for fashion" lol, that just seems so true...Oh I liked this a lot, it's your usual style and it's such a pretty story...you always come up with different characters: they have something in common, but always are different. I love this girl so much...but I'm sorry for him in the end...great great great! teehee! |
| TheHangerOfAbhorrantDislike 2006-11-26 ch 1, | abuseYa know? I really like reading your work. It's so real and I have to say that this is one of my favorite pieces. It's adorable in a kind of tragic way...I dunno if anyone but me gets that. But, I just want to say that I really enjoyed it. Made my day. -TheHangerOfAbhorrantDislike- |
| Aquafied 2006-11-26 ch 1, | abusepity party wednesday is a popular topic this week |
| Dragonzz 2006-11-26 ch 1, | abuseI applaud you. This is so awesomely well-written. I love it. Instant fave ~dragonzz~ |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-11-25 ch 1, | abuseIntriguing. |
| Ladiebug 2006-11-25 ch 1, | abusenice. i love everything u write. |