Oh creepy. Very sinister... umm *sucks at critique* I liked it!

Real nice poem, a bit dark for me with the sinister grin, and the bloody roots, but that doesn't stop me from loving it. Could do with a bit of spell checking, but so could all my pieces. Speaking of which, I just posted my first story and I was hoping you could give it a quick read and review. Just if you've got the time, thanks! And again, great poem!

As always, enjoyable to read, with just a dash of dread thrown in to get my mind buzzing. E-mail me soon. I've got some twisted projects of my own I would love to run by you.

NEVER give this up by the way. Your mind goes places that mine just can't reach.

This poem is good, and it has a very interesting subject. However, I did notice a few things. Firstly, punctation isn't used very well. There are a number of places you could adjust that to make it easier to read, and flow better. In line one, you used 'him' instead of 'his.' Also, in line six, you used the word 'when' two times very close together. Other than that, it's really great.

This is creepy. I love it though.

Smiles!

This poem brings up a good point that our world today needs to be made aware of. Killer teleporting cats, taking our young little girls into holes, never to be returned, and probably tortured and killed. This has gone on for TOO LONG and we MUST put a stop to this. I of course suggest first, that we get rid of all the cats. Who knows which ones can teleport. Next step would be to hide all girls, in well, holes in the ground. If they are already in the ground, they totally can't get taken there later.

But to the actual poem. Er, chesire seems pretty evil. That poor little girlie.

Heehe, creepishly good. I love it! Great job!

nice. i like it.

Interesting.
Not my favorite of your writings but I like it all the same.

Pretty cool, with the creepiness of the cat. I found Disney's Alice in Wonderland creepy, and I'm not saying just moderately creepy. Your poem fit it very well, I loved the description.