AW i love it!! it flows together nicely and it's short and sweet ^_^ it reminds me of something i might write. :)

Awwh... this is great heart-fluttering, sweet, and sappy stuff, Michael. You're such a romantic, and from the recent slew of reviews I'm not the only one who thinks so either. Keep wooing us and breaking our hearts with your words Michael. ~Scottie

PS. ...but before you do, let me find my tissues first please.

...this is soo emotional...i love it!! keep writing

Michael, I love, love, love, love, love your writing. It makes me melt, you paint such a perfect picture of how your romantic personality comes to life. My favourite line is the last because it shows how animated someone can be when they are in love, or if they have lost. I dont know this should make sense to you, you know that I am horrible with words. Luckily one of us is. You can decode my thoughts.