|Reviews for pierce me with promises|
| Halcyon Impulsion 4/8/11 . chapter 1
Interesting piece. The fear is palpable in this. The first staza is my favorite. I also liked this:
don't know how to make all your lovewords
into truth I can touch.
| Aimee Raven 11/27/06 . chapter 1
Aw it's so sad...the second stanza is *beautiful* reminds me of the classics...so touching! It's...oh I love it _..so pretty and bittersweet! Hehe, I'll stop blabbering. Great job!