Interesting piece. The fear is palpable in this. The first staza is my favorite. I also liked this:

don't know how to make all your lovewords

into truth I can touch.

Aw it's so sad...the second stanza is *beautiful* reminds me of the classics...so touching! It's...oh I love it _..so pretty and bittersweet! Hehe, I'll stop blabbering. Great job!