|Reviews for flip of the coin|
| Halcyon Impulsion 4/4/11 . chapter 1
Interesting piece. This is my favorite part:
a state of visible intention
synonymous with both swimming
| Aimee Raven 11/27/06 . chapter 1
Filled with gore..."we'd build into the earth a lake like no other" really interesting imagery. You use very powerful words, though this leaves a lot of space for different interpretations. I like it, but it's definitely not one of your best.