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| Lizzy-Lou 2007-06-13 ch 1,  | abuseYou know, I really, really like this. I'm not even sure why, well, I mean, because it's well-written, of course. But something else about it appeals to me, I just can't put my finger on it. |
| trash can art 2006-11-25 ch 1, | abusewth... i didn't receive alerts on either of your new stories. :shakes evil fist at fictionpress: i do not approve. of fictionpress, of course, not you, silly. xD i wonder what exactly you were feeling at the time you wrote this, if your mood is the exact opposite of your themes and topics. possibly about paul and cheese? all kidding aside, this is beautiful- no, no, GORGEOUS [yes, very much like you], and somehow, embodies a piece of you that i can't seem to pinpoint. in short: i want to shoot you and mount you on my wall. is that morbid? i find it kind of kinky. ;D |
| wicked-design-288 2006-11-24 ch 1, | abuseThis reminds me of an aged groupie...and a famous one. Well, I'm not sure if that's what you meant by it, but I love it, regardless of what it's about. I mean, I just love your style in general and this poem is fabulous. It shows how a "naked and famous" person really feels beyond her facade. It may seem odd at first, but I adore this poem and all of your work. My favorite lines: But I am still naked To everyone And famous To no one Great work, love |
| Yalime Alokin 2006-11-20 ch 1, | abuseWeird, but I liked it. Very weird. Yes, dear, this is a strong poem. Very true and simplistic style that totally sums up the world of humanity today. Kudos! |