wow. i love it. enough said.
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Ah that ending!! Sends shivers down my spine. I love the way this story is writen, very intricate and it flows so well! Gah, why can't I write superbley awesome like you haha.

A beautiful, gripping, haunting story that I found extremely pleasurable to read. The lack of quotation marks fit this story perfectly, and I am telling you right now, this story was told masterfully, excellently paced, and one of my all-time favorites. I love everything about it. You are a natural writer, and may you grace this site again with your work.