this really brings to light the importance of punctuation weve all taken it for granted i forgot how difficult it is to not use punctuation or read non punctuated sentences thats why this review uses no punctuation i found it so unnatural to write so i must applaud you for managing to do so XD

Let me just say that those three chapters were the best things I'd seen all day. I love how there's no punctuation in any of them, it's very reminiscent of a child telling a story, since they usually don't stop talking until the end. These little memories are so sweet and sad at the same time, I loved everything about this piece.