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| violet-eyez 2008-08-28 ch 17,  | abuseaww so sweet |
| narniafreak 2008-08-27 ch 4, anon. | abuseAww! Really cute story. I love your storyline and you really seem to make your characters real. Keep it up. |
| killer chipmunk 2008-08-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'm enjoying it so far. It's really pretty good. Ttyl, Killer Chipmunk |
| TearsofaDarkMoon 2008-06-26 ch 16, | abuseI really like this story. I hope you continue writing it. |
| lbr 2008-05-26 ch 15, anon. | abuseI've fallen in love with Clint and Candice. Please tell me there is much more to come and soon. I can't wait to see what happens with them and see exactly what happens with Nana's comments. |
| bonjour-mes-ami 2008-01-28 ch 16, anon. | abuseAwesome story! Get going on another DSB story! Could you do an epilogue for this one?!?! Please? I wish you would also do one more chapter before the epilogue, if you're up for that... |
| Michelle 2008-01-27 ch 16, anon. | abuseI have been waiting patiently for over a month now. It is pushing 2! I really really want a new chapter! :) This here is one of my favoriates and i wanna read more! |
| violet-eyez 2007-12-17 ch 16, | abuseso what's gonna happen |
| Michelle 2007-12-12 ch 16, anon. | abuseI really like the plot line. The story is very well written. The only problem I have found is that you over use a couple of words. There are three but i only remember two, they are abmonished and chaste. Try finding some synonyms for those two words and using them less. Other wise I totally love the whole plot and everything! Update soon! |
| Creative-Wallflower 2007-12-10 ch 16, | abuseAha! Another chapter! As always, wonderful. And sorry about not replying to your last email, things have been rather...hectic around here. Barn building and such has left no time for anything. |
| CarlyJo 2007-12-10 ch 16, | abuseStill totally love the story! Can't wait for more! UPDATE SOON! ~Carly =:3 ) |
| collegestudent 2007-10-13 ch 13, | abuseHey! I had to go back a ways to find a chapter I hadn't already reviewed...when will you be updating? I know I'm impatient...what can I say. If you didn't write such good stories I wouldn't bug you to update! :) |
| Incurable Adoration 2007-10-05 ch 1, anon. | abusenot bad, not bad, but uh... you have "began" where you should have "begun"... just to help! |
| serenity180 2007-08-15 ch 1, | abuseHey, I hope you finish this story because this is one of my favorite story. Update soon when you've the time. |
| The Shadows' Sunrise 2007-07-23 ch 15, | abuseAh! It stops! Why must it stop?! haha. :) well this story is very good and I hope that you will soon update. :) shadows' sunrise |