I know I'm realyy late for the party, but I just wanted to let you know that your story is AWESOME!! My friend recommended this story to me (actually, you met her at Animazement, she's your fangirl and she bought me a hat). So...this a great story!!

Wowzers! =D
This really is a great story, and now I'm going to have to read the next one...thanks Niki...Thanks alot -_-
The nerve...gettin me hooked *grumble grumble*
ANYWAYS I really likes the Leo/Zach tidbits! YAY YAOI~DRAMA! :3
And Nat/Manny are SO Confusing... @_@

And as for shortening the whole thing up... Lemme see.
In all honesty I really don't see anyway that you can without taking some things away.
You could cut down on a few fluff scenes I suppose, not that there are that many to begin with. (But i do adore ze fluff so...*Le sigh*)

Sorry I can't help you out anymore than that right now, but I will keep thinking about it. ^_^

this was really interesting. i look forward to the sequel.

perversely means strangely. pervertedly means what you intended. i tend to get them mixed up too.

An epilogue? Hooray, more story. ^^ Caught a few spelling mistakes and that kind junk in there, but you'll have to forgive me as I'm feeling awfully lazy at the moment. If you'd like I could find them and point them out for you; just ask. =D

It's a good epilogue though. And I'm still excited for part two, and now there's the webcomic version to enjoy as well. Whoot.

Wow, I totally wasn't expecting a epilogue. :]

But good good, shows that Janis really does have a heart. :P

Hmm, I'll be holding out for the My Fake Heart; Disastrous! :]

Til then [and sorreh bout the lame review], cya. :]

So you've had 49 reviews for quite a while and that is such a ridiculous odd number to end on. I figured 50 is so much better and even and divisible by so many more numbers. Besides this story is awesome and it deserves something that is divisible by 1,2,5,10,25,and 50 rather than just 1,7,and 49. Yeah, I'm a math nerd. In addition, I (along with many others) have been waiting all summer for My Fake Heart Disastrous! and I just wanted you to know we're still here and as anxious as ever. Take your time, make it awesome, and I'll be here when you do.

Sitting, waiting, wishing,
pyro.writer.

ps-Sorry, it's like 2am and I just woke up with the sudden urge to do this.

Hmm I enjoyed this a lot. Though, I feel like there were a few plot holes. As well as a bit of confusion, the switiching of characters got a little har do to keep track of and such... Anyway, terrific job, I can't wait to read more.

Helena Emma

I'm disappointed with the ending to this, but that's probably just me. There just doesn't seem to be enough tying up of loose ends for me!

I think this last chapter is probably the worst of the lot, but hopefully the sequel will answer the questions I have...

Spawny

HOLY CRAPZ! Yes, you should make a webcomic, and yes the sequel should span a longer amount of time. If you managed to cram this much drama into a week, imagine three months! Have fun writing the sequel, and gimme a holler when its out!

OMG this was such a good story im looking forward to the Sequal... It was quite sad though...:( anywho needless to say I loved it...

Takara

Good ending to the first part. It's conclusive, yet not. Makes me want to read the sequel all the more. I like the preview for the sequel, too; reminds me a bit of a movie trailor or something like that. ^^ As for the web comic, I'm interested in seeing more, though if it's not possible, that's fine, too. No pressure from me.

I think it's an interesting aspect that it takes place in only one week. It kind of seems longer (maybe because stories generally are over a larger time span), but it's cool. Hmm, maybe for the sequel do two weeks? XD

Some errors in this one (typos and the likes), but I must apologize. I'm being quite lazy right now and not going to point them out. ^^; If you'd like me to, just ask and I will, however.

Shall be waiting for the sequel!

I don't know where to start. =S

I liked the ending, how everything is still unfinished between everyone. Much better than a 'happily ever after' ending. Can't believe it all took place in just a week, I should've paid better attention. =P

I thought Jacob was gonna come onto Leo and they'd fall in love and all that goes with it *ponders*. Maybe I just read the artroom scene wrong.

When is summer 2007? Haha, your advertising for the sequel reminds me of those bad TV show cliff hangers. In the good way, of course. =P

I was expecting Natalie and Janis to have problems, but that looks rpomised for the next sequel.

I was realy expecting Mary & Amanda to have something happen, that was a surprise twist. =)

Anywho, must be off to get ready for work, or something. =)

ps; Can't wait to see what happens with Zach/Leo/Random Movie Patron Guy. =D

Omg that's it? Its over? I want a sequel!

Zomg. Mary and Amanda. I don't really like that, I think Mary is better suited to Leonard. Zach is hot, and funny and all, but he's a jerk and Mary is cooler. Mary is cool to the tenth power. Mary Mary YAY!

And, I'm sorry so much of this review is deranged rambling. I tend to do that when I like a story. It's a good thing, though, because it shows that there's few errors. Otherwise this thing would be full of "blablablah! Fix this and this and that!"

There is an error I spotted, though. You misspelled Mary's name right here:

“Well, look…” Mare pointed to the occupied corner.

TTNR. Can't wait for the sequel.

Can't wait for the penultimate chapter! Turn it out please. Interesting developments *cough cough go Zack and Leo cough cough*