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Elizabeth Bilberry 2006-11-29 . chapter 1
The added 'I love you's' were a nice touch and really added to this. I do wish I could say that I can relate to what you say and tell you that all will be okay, but then I would be lying. I can say that your emotions always shine through strongly and make me feel as well.

EB
Moondog Dozier 2006-11-20 . chapter 1
Strong emotion makes this very relatable for the reader. The intensity of feeling helps to sustain the picture. Well written. Good work. Vivid contrast.
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