The strength of your feelings echo from every line. The reader, can relate to what you are saying. Well done.

My gosh, truth does overflow from the heart of a person in love! Eloquent and straight to the point, subtle yet revealing, though their is no anticipated plot, the reader is enveloped in one's world of love, causing others to want to be in love and with love themselves!

Cuz. you are one lucky girl. i wish i had what you have. o well. when the time comes. good luck with him. he's realy nice, cute too. don't worry i won't touch him. but i will look. ;) love you
Ame