I liked the idea of your story, but, had trouble reading it because of numerous spelling, grammar and punctuation mistakes. You should check these things before you post... But, on a positive note, I liked the ending here it was sweet.

It's a cute story, but your grammar is very bad in this, and you need to use question marks. This was still cute, but the grammar was just a bit distracting.

This is a good story, kinda mispelled, but still, the plot is very sweet.