sorry to hear bout evrything. hope you feel better. i really mean it. and i hope you find the time to update someore.

HOLY CRAP - That was so hot! Please update! Hot flushes!!

f - u - c - k me.

that was hot.

can't wait for the next installment !

lololololol wow, nice. I adore you for making this chapter. really. i do. one, it was hawt (not just 'hot', so 'hot' that is has to be spelled 'hawt') And i love Jared! How convenient is that "i cheated on you with your little brother" bit. and hes like "YES!" in his head i bet, (besides the bj of course).

I LOVED the Thelma and Louise reference in this, and its awesome because i was listening to the song Thelma and Louise by HorrorPops...

also, was it just me or was the...time all screwed up in this?
nine
six
seven thirty
... :P

Maggie's sweet. Kinda. I dunno, but I like her. SO YEAH DON'T USE A YEAR TO UPDATE THIS TIME, OK?

Oh god...fck>_>
did you have to stop there?! of all the fcking momentsXD
damn...I love jared..hwahahahah and NaomixDwhahhahaha
funyXD omg
I loved this story omg XD
but please update soonXDand omg maggie cheated with his little bro! omgXD if it was max oka.y...but broXDwhahhaha
poor NaomiXD
Anyways thank you for this amazingly funny storyxD and please update soon...

Your a good writer, i wish i was this good, i think that I'm the only guy that is reading this well i think that but i could be wrong. could you do me a favor though? can you please look for my story when i post it and tell me what you think. if you don't that's okay, i understand that you have a life unlike me.^-^ but keep going i want to see were this story is going.

I LOVE this!

You haven't lost me! I love Naomi and I'm really happy you're back BUT I need to re-read the whole thing before reading this chapter, I'll come back to review properly after I'm done :)

I read the beginnings of this story ages ago. I'm glad you picked it up again. Trystan is very angsty. I can understand his confusion, but he needs to treat other people a bit better. For the life of me, I don't understand what Jared sees in him.

thisis sexy and funny, i hope you continue soon!

Hooray for sexy Jared! Yay! Will Naomi/Trystan wear girls clothes again once he gets back to school?

Oh my Fucking god. I just started reading this and I am hooked. I'm also starting a story some what like this but way different. If it was not for the fact that you have more chapters of this story here i would be the first to tell you to keep going. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the story and if it is not complete the new chapters of it.(dam i sound like some kind of fan girl, but I'm a Dude. Oh well such is life.) keep up the good work. and if you have any other stories that you think i should read send me the names of them and i will look for them on the site. thanks. Email is . just give me your pen name and i will know who you are thanks.

YES! You write the best friken lemons EVER! I am SO EXCITED for the next chapter... Aw man, that's AWEOMSE!
I really love this story... It's great! SO FUNNY! Please update soon, and I missed you during that year you never updated. -glare- But you're back now... -smile-
Update soon!
lee