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| sicklysnowwhite 2007-01-09 ch 1,  | abusethis i love! VISUALLY PLEASING!! wonderful. i would sugest changing the summary. it sounds a bit boring. not very interesting. |
| James Austin Valiant 2006-11-21 ch 1, | abuseThese are some great haikus, and it's a shame that not too many more people have submitted reviews for them. May I publish them in my school's newspaper? I'd like to share them with the campus community. |
| The Intelligent Designer 2006-11-21 ch 1, | abuseVery interestuinbg layout for a poem. Connecting and stringing several almost haikus together. Very strange, but it works well, and is descriptive. |