nice. very neat. havent seen poetry writing like this for a long time, possibly ever. woo for ambiguosity.
but yeah, you manage to embed into my mind the sheer incomprehensible size of america, not just physically but its reach of power across the world, in just a few words. not bad.
i like the last line. makes it seem harsh, inhospitable, unwelcoming. you have talent.

Hm, I like it. A description of America, and not from an overtly political perspective. So hard to find these days. Ahem. Anyway, I like the imagery. I see something vast and somewhat vague. Hm, makes me think. Oh, and I like the last line, too. From sea to shining sea...

A good write!

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