Love it. Really well written and very much like a silly young boy in love. I hope they make it.

Very nice. I love it

What a fabulous piece. It captured the atmosphere perfectly and the characters were very well-rounded and even interesting. I like how they didn't have names; it made it easier to sympathize with them. Also, the language wasn't overly flowery or sentimental, but it still struck something. Bravo. *faery tragedy

Hi. This is Lady Sorciere from You turn up in the strangest places. Well, not strange really. It's just weird to see you here. Well, I liked this story as much as I did your other ones. It was interesting. Are you going to add any more? Probably not since it's a oneshot. Anyway, it's midnight, and I have to go.
Seize the Day!

They can run to Scotland and be married just over the border! I'm sort of getting addicted to your stories now. Congratulations, that doesn't happen often. Your historical detail is astounding.