really interesting

It's a nicely written story that's a bit confusing (I think that was your intention...) What kind of illness does she have? Schizophrenic? Anyways, I loved it and I hope you keep on writing

Great beginning, I love it. You used 'find' instead of 'fine' when she was telling the manager that she would work til noon. Is Tim a figment of her imagination? What kind of sickness does she have? I think I have an idea but I'm not completely sure. I've read some of your other stories and I love them (Genteel Obession has me a little paranoid about being such a hermit lol) Beach Fantasy and Sabine Woman were awesome. You're a wonderful writer, I wish I had your talent. Keep it up, you're doing great.