okay she should sue, and put him in jail.

Okay one thing I'm confused about here. Isn't jenna's mom still with her dad? so there's no way she can set up a meeting. Disgusting old pervs...

I think that this first pae was really good!I am going to read the rest of the book later.

Nice start--I think I know which friend I am(but not quite sure... I DEFINITELY know who Ayame is-lol).

Make sure you say in the same tense at the beginning--it goes into present a couple of times. And also, first you said Flicker taught her how to ride, and then you say Tana. But other than that, awesome! I'll read more when I have time...

I like it!

:D this was posted twice in the same chapter.

good chapter tho.

hm...i think it was a bit...yeah. it would have taken more convincing i think, it doesnt really seem that realistic that he would tell her all the info. maybe add in more talk, maybe bribe him or something, just so he doesnt casually blurt it all out.

other than that, its really sad...but very good too.

onto the next

nothing better happen to Flicker!

favs now

:D awesome.

:D great start!!

it is really well written and has a lot of personality. I say keep writing!! I will keep an eye on this one. Story alert list i think...

Autumn ^^

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