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| Otseis Ragnarok 2006-12-20 ch 1,  | abuseAnd she's off to kill the wizard... The Wonderful Wizard Of Oz. (Corny, I know) Seriously, though... I would not like to run into her... or maybe I would... |
| Ironic Presence 2006-12-11 ch 1, | abuseInteresting... I like your use of word choice and how you fit it all together. Sorry, if my brain wasn't short-circuiting right now, I would give you a better review. But i like it. |
| The World at Work 2006-12-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseI guess I read some more. I love the darkness. It makes me laugh for a reason. |
| lronMaiden 2006-11-30 ch 1, | abuseI really like the ending. A few spelling mistakes (well, maybe only a couple) but overall I quite like it. I like "the crazy lady of oz". |
| bratja 2006-11-28 ch 1, | abuseOh, I like this, and how you incorporated the Wizard of Oz into it. (: |
| TK Halliwell 2006-11-28 ch 1, | abuseHey tiff that was amazing ... now i know more of the Crazy lady of Oz .. it was nice ... not too long and elaborate ... i give it a 9/10. |
| wicked-design-288 2006-11-27 ch 1, | abuseI really like this poem, it's beautiful. It's tough to pinpoint the meaning, which is great! I really love this, it's awesome. My favorite lines: The truth so stark is only hidden Beneath your shallow eyes great job! |
| convoluted cartoon 2006-11-25 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was so deep and beautiful. |
| polka dots and addictions 2006-11-24 ch 1, | abuseooh this is just so mysterious & gorgeous & unique that i cant help but love it! it has a nice sort of rhythum to it, & i love the style it has. well written. ~Bex xx |