"You can go now."

"We can still move."

Powerful, fucked-up goodness. I don't have any way of explaining how much I enjoyed this.

Well be sure to continue with this. Its such a mature piece of writing! You should really have more reviews but then againe ff.n population seems to be dwindling with talent. Alas good job

woah... awsome story! a little bit poetic for my taste. but that just shows that your work requires intelligence of your readers. a very good trait in a budding author!

Hey! Great first chapter! You're really talented!