|Reviews for M o t i o n l e s s|
| dreamshell 3/4/07 . chapter 1
"You can go now."
"We can still move."
Powerful, fucked-up goodness. I don't have any way of explaining how much I enjoyed this.
| Bleu Mystz 12/13/06 . chapter 1
Well be sure to continue with this. Its such a mature piece of writing! You should really have more reviews but then againe ff.n population seems to be dwindling with talent. Alas good job
| MC25 11/28/06 . chapter 1
woah... awsome story! a little bit poetic for my taste. but that just shows that your work requires intelligence of your readers. a very good trait in a budding author!
| lindleyjo 11/22/06 . chapter 1
Hey! Great first chapter! You're really talented!