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Heaven Smile 2007-09-06 . chapter 1
It's all very good, but the last stanza really made me laugh with entertainment.

Meaning I love how you just prey on the fact that he is Catholic and it's almost like you bathe in that frailty. In that almost bitter sweet irony.

But the line:
"We'll blame it on our combined loveless childhoods" was also a good view into how you can crave attention from anyone when you never had anyone to give attention to. I still really liked that line, though.

Nonetheless, you should be careful with this loving and flesh time bomb. He's a very ** up person to do the things you portray him as doing...

I love it.
beautiful. only tempermental 2007-01-23 . chapter 1
This caught me from the first line. That's just a gripping image.

"You’re a ** up angel who lacks the acceptable anger management classes to be harmless enough to touch me, but tonight I could really care less." I love the flow of that and how there's a fondness in the tone, even though... well, it would normally be a bit freaky. Somehow this feels... right, the way you wrote it.

And I just love the last lines.

(I was going to say not that I'm into S&M or anything, like the other reviewer, just to make myself look good... but, to hell with it, I am. :P)

Beautiful work.
Ellin Louise 2007-01-02 . chapter 1
The second to last verse is very powerful, I particulary the middle line of it.
Eboniccinderella 2006-11-22 . chapter 1
I like this poem.I like the freedom of the form you wrote it in...and the type of love described.Not that I am S&M,just that your general,run of the mill Barbie loves Ken stuff is so boring.
Helena Evangelist 2006-11-22 . chapter 1
I loved this, it really hit a chord for me. It's what I've been thinking about lately, in a strange sort of way...Anyway, good work. I liked the first section.
protection-to the top 2006-11-22 . chapter 1
I like how this starts; the first line's very clever. I grinned at the ending, too.
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