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| Arrow's Flight 2008-06-03 ch 3,  | abuseAgain gorgeous. There's a couple places that are a little wordy, but overall amazing. You have a very elegant style, and I love it. Lovely discriptions and pacing. Keep up the good work. -Arrow's Flight- |
| Arrow's Flight 2008-06-03 ch 2, | abuseBeautiful. Your discriptions manage to be both picturesque and haunting. Kudos! -Arrow's Flight- |
| Celeste Se'oir 2006-12-02 ch 2, | abuseThis...has nothing to do with smiles, whatsoever. Anyways, yes love, life its all essencially futile. There is no point, except for the fact that a person has the chance to feel the happiness for the period of time before their life gets snuffed out because we don't know what happens after death. I guess is just a paradox of life. Later, Cathryn Black~ |
| Celeste Se'oir 2006-12-02 ch 1, | abuseI should have read this sooner. I love your interpritations of life and, in this case, the termoils that people face during it. I don't I have ever been one of the ones who let myself cry on your shoulder, but i would never let myself. It doesn't matter, you've done more for me than I think you will ever realize. I still remember those hours of nonsensical talk about life and philosophy. And though it hurts my head to think about them, I think they reveiled to me more about myself. Even though all that time when I was talking to you to get you to reveil youself to me. Funny, how things work out. Smile Heffer, because you may have had a hand in helping save at least one persons life. And I envy you for it. Later, Cathryn Black~ |
| Shnerpels Inc 2006-12-01 ch 1, | abuseLemme tell you the truth. I'm TRYING to like it. But I...don't. Well written, well expressed, but it seems kind of forced. I don't know, maybe I'm just crazy, but...meh. |