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Reviews For: The Abstract Goddess

Caught By Myself
2006-12-29
ch 1,
abuseHaunting. Beautifully haunting. Subtle and powerful.
Morte d'Amour
2006-12-07
ch 1,
abuseOh, wow! This is very abstract, just like the title suggests with a little divinity. Very deep and wonderful are your choice of words in this. I was astonished from the very beginning: "They say your mind is puzzle box but to me I see only the clay that needs molding under practiced hands. I can show you the universes hidden in the details, the populations in a drop of water, and the heavens in my eyes." Beautiful!! I'd like to point out, though, that I think you forgot an a'a so that it'd be 'a puzzle box.'

This is excellent, and it sounds so deep I feel I can only touch it open the surface. Wonderful job! :)
TeaWithOnions
2006-11-25
ch 1,
abuseO, Interesting. Love the word choice. Another fabulous job!
shelaaah
2006-11-23
ch 1,
abuseLovely! (=
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