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| Caught By Myself 2006-12-29 ch 1, | abuseHaunting. Beautifully haunting. Subtle and powerful. |
| Morte d'Amour 2006-12-07 ch 1, | abuseOh, wow! This is very abstract, just like the title suggests with a little divinity. Very deep and wonderful are your choice of words in this. I was astonished from the very beginning: "They say your mind is puzzle box but to me I see only the clay that needs molding under practiced hands. I can show you the universes hidden in the details, the populations in a drop of water, and the heavens in my eyes." Beautiful!! I'd like to point out, though, that I think you forgot an a'a so that it'd be 'a puzzle box.' This is excellent, and it sounds so deep I feel I can only touch it open the surface. Wonderful job! :) |
| TeaWithOnions 2006-11-25 ch 1, | abuseO, Interesting. Love the word choice. Another fabulous job! |
| shelaaah 2006-11-23 ch 1, | abuseLovely! (= |