I simply loved this little "short" lets call it. I, myself, live in California, and these descriptions seemed all too true.
Ahh...This brings back my memories of the beach. Which reminds me, I haven't been there in a while...I'll try going again in the summer. ^^'
Keep up the good work!

Very well-described & pretty! If I saw the same thing I'd just be like, "It was a nice day at the beach." So yeah.. well done!

Maybe I only feel an obligation to say this was excellent because someday we're going to start a band and tour around the world and if I don't say it's excellent you will forever hold a grudge, but this is excellent.

bec

this is really good... i like it... your descriptions are very provocative (in a good way, they provoke a mental image)... i like it...